tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post4836924396088601133..comments2023-11-03T02:01:11.488-07:00Comments on मन के झरोखे से...: आत्मसमर्पणmonalihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00644599427657644560noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-27320464480788073002011-12-07T04:17:36.010-08:002011-12-07T04:17:36.010-08:00atyant sunder rachana..bohot khoob Monali ji :)atyant sunder rachana..bohot khoob Monali ji :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-88626981533186841262010-10-01T20:31:56.024-07:002010-10-01T20:31:56.024-07:00वक़्त से पहले और किस्मत से ज्यादा किसी को कुछ नहीं...वक़्त से पहले और किस्मत से ज्यादा किसी को कुछ नहीं मिलता!<br />राम जी से शिकायत! किसकी? राम जी की!<br />बढ़िया है!<br />खुश रहने का! <br />आशीषसूफ़ी आशीष/ ਸੂਫ਼ੀ ਆਸ਼ੀਸ਼https://www.blogger.com/profile/11282838704446252275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-47630608548924986112009-11-01T20:56:58.417-08:002009-11-01T20:56:58.417-08:00beautiful work..beautiful work..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-12050887302228234432009-10-30T10:08:07.764-07:002009-10-30T10:08:07.764-07:00awesome poem...
I must say, it reflects my feeling...awesome poem...<br />I must say, it reflects my feeling true to the point.Pushphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07103178964768247382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-83938811228548722652009-10-29T08:34:31.434-07:002009-10-29T08:34:31.434-07:00bahut umda peshkash hai aapki har nazm vo ghazal ....bahut umda peshkash hai aapki har nazm vo ghazal ...dekhkar aapki rachnaaon ko mera dil ek baar phir likhne ko inspire ho gaya ...kabhi aap ko waqt mile hamare blogs ke darshan zarur kijiye am sure ki aap ko kafi pasand ayega kyuki aapke mizaz humse kafi milte julte maloom padte hai <br />keep it up <br />best regards <br />aleem azmi bloggerअलीम आज़मीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15152383412965088352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-82535884621344878842009-10-28T03:22:14.604-07:002009-10-28T03:22:14.604-07:00शब्दों को जोड़ कर आपने जो माला तैयार की है वो बहुत...शब्दों को जोड़ कर आपने जो माला तैयार की है वो बहुत खूबसूरत है...अंतिम दो पंक्तिया लाजवाब.....बधाईPawan Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08513723264371221324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-46786392894040883822009-10-18T04:00:05.508-07:002009-10-18T04:00:05.508-07:00di aapki kavita ateev sundar hai!!
Nehadi aapki kavita ateev sundar hai!!<br />NehaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-41906190749984579092009-10-15T23:14:02.319-07:002009-10-15T23:14:02.319-07:00सुंदर व्यंजनाएं।
दीपपर्व की अशेष शुभकामनाएँ।
आप ब्...<b>सुंदर व्यंजनाएं।<br />दीपपर्व की अशेष शुभकामनाएँ।<br />आप ब्लॉग जगत में महादेवी सा यश पाएं।</b><br />-------------------------<br />आइए हम <a href="http://ts.samwaad.com/2009/10/blog-post_16.html" rel="nofollow">पर्यावरण </a> और ब्लॉगिंग को भी <a href="http://sb.samwaad.com/2009/10/blog-post_13.html" rel="nofollow"> सुरक्षित </a> बनाएं।Dr. Zakir Ali Rajnishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03629318327237916782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-42444057989141585092009-10-14T00:24:24.718-07:002009-10-14T00:24:24.718-07:00मन की संवेदनाओं को बहुत गहरे से अभिव्यक्ित प्रदान...मन की संवेदनाओं को बहुत गहरे से अभिव्यक्ित प्रदान की है आपने।<br />----------<br /><a href="http://sb.samwaad.com/" rel="nofollow">डिस्कस लगाएं, सुरक्षित कमेंट पाएँ </a>Science Bloggers Associationhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11209193571602615574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-6758459017807835392009-10-12T07:32:40.446-07:002009-10-12T07:32:40.446-07:00first tym teri negativity wali poem ka favour krne...first tym teri negativity wali poem ka favour krne ka man kiya bhut hi sach or khubsurat hai par last paragraph ko hakikat se jodne me meri sahmati kabhi nhi hai or ye doori kayam rakhne ki har sambhav koshish m krugi mann ki har mujhe kabul nhi haiNidhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11553560276227921680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-76822406310902119292009-10-11T10:33:19.168-07:002009-10-11T10:33:19.168-07:00बहुत ही सार्थक रचना.
बधाई
मेरा ब्लॉग ज्वाइन करने क...बहुत ही सार्थक रचना.<br />बधाई<br />मेरा ब्लॉग ज्वाइन करने के लिए धन्यवादरचना दीक्षितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10298077073448653913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-83766688283105718132009-10-11T10:16:54.725-07:002009-10-11T10:16:54.725-07:00स्वप्न तो देखिये मित्र!
उन्हें न रोकिये,
जो दिखात...स्वप्न तो देखिये मित्र! <br />उन्हें न रोकिये,<br />जो दिखाता है<br />वही साकार करता है.पंकजhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05230648047026512339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-71583866737557840122009-10-11T08:16:09.091-07:002009-10-11T08:16:09.091-07:00wow! what a beautiful poem...........wow! what a beautiful poem...........डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-4724120609435159992009-10-10T03:55:50.999-07:002009-10-10T03:55:50.999-07:00सर्वशक्तिमान से बढ़िया गुफ्तगू.
मेरे ब्लॉग पर आने...सर्वशक्तिमान से बढ़िया गुफ्तगू. <br />मेरे ब्लॉग पर आने का धन्यवाद.डॉ टी एस दरालhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16674553361981740487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-31805072097166970272009-10-09T19:48:56.627-07:002009-10-09T19:48:56.627-07:00hi monali.....kya lajwab likha hai aapne.....aur p...hi monali.....kya lajwab likha hai aapne.....aur pics to aur achchi .....sahi hai na kisi ki marzi ke bina patta nahi hilta....aisa hona bhi chahiye......mark raihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11466538793942348029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-9035681246256473682009-10-09T13:31:22.525-07:002009-10-09T13:31:22.525-07:00wow...good one...wow...good one...जोगीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05811790160070544566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-7894112459287438802009-10-09T06:10:23.273-07:002009-10-09T06:10:23.273-07:00सुन्दर भवनाओं की खूबसूरत अभिव्यक्ति।
पूनमसुन्दर भवनाओं की खूबसूरत अभिव्यक्ति।<br />पूनमपूनम श्रीवास्तवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09864127183201263925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-18073478903298450452009-10-09T05:17:49.510-07:002009-10-09T05:17:49.510-07:00aapkee kavita ek sachaai se rubroo karaate hue hri...aapkee kavita ek sachaai se rubroo karaate hue hriday ke ahsaaso se jodatee hai. sunder rachana ke liye badhaai<br />http://hariprasadsharma.blogspot.com/iye badhaaiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13199219119636372821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-69199536422493874812009-10-09T05:16:38.537-07:002009-10-09T05:16:38.537-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13199219119636372821noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-11328093886711303232009-10-08T23:51:05.001-07:002009-10-08T23:51:05.001-07:00Namshkar!
aapki rachana bahut hi sundar hai,
badha...Namshkar!<br />aapki rachana bahut hi sundar hai,<br />badhai ho aapkoKuldeep Kumar Mishrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18083682608623486810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-18536317940939358222009-10-08T22:10:34.988-07:002009-10-08T22:10:34.988-07:00a masterpiece!!a masterpiece!!Aadishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08885834886064741226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-74169239626451180942009-10-08T19:34:39.194-07:002009-10-08T19:34:39.194-07:00"tum nahi samajhoge
sapne tootne ki taqleef
..."tum nahi samajhoge <br />sapne tootne ki taqleef<br />mehnat se tnge panno par <br />sayaahi bikharne ki taqleef..."<br /><br />waah !!<br />mn ke andar kaheeN gehre samaae hue <br />jazbaat ki bahut hu khoobsurat tarjumaani<br />lafz-lafz sajeev ho uthaa hai<br />kash.m.kash ko bayaan karti hui <br />bahut sindar rachnaa <br />badhaaee <br /><br />---MUFLIS---daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-84337959833617463332009-10-08T09:04:17.021-07:002009-10-08T09:04:17.021-07:00आपकी कविता आपकी तरह ही बेहद सुन्दर है .आपकी कविता आपकी तरह ही बेहद सुन्दर है .सुशीला पुरीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18122925656609079793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-79497872951690986562009-10-08T08:57:32.395-07:002009-10-08T08:57:32.395-07:00सीधी किन्तु सार्थक, सरल किन्तु गहन.कविता अपने पूरे...सीधी किन्तु सार्थक, सरल किन्तु गहन.कविता अपने पूरे सौन्दर्य के साथ यहाँ है.बच्चे सी बात करती और विचार से परिपक्व.<br />कविता पढने का अवसर दिलाने का शुक्रिया.sanjay vyashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12907579198332052765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-55832167309416004642009-10-08T08:23:39.238-07:002009-10-08T08:23:39.238-07:00जेन आस्टिन की एक प्रार्थना है जिसका हिंदी भावार्थ ...जेन आस्टिन की एक प्रार्थना है जिसका हिंदी भावार्थ है की हे ईशवर मै जो बदल सकू उसे बदलनें की शक्ति देना ....और जो न बदल सकू उसे स्वीकार करने करने की शक्ति देना !! .....अच्छी कविता ....!!!अभिषेक आर्जवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12169006209532181466noreply@blogger.com