tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post2618745134571734174..comments2023-11-03T02:01:11.488-07:00Comments on मन के झरोखे से...: जुगनू सरीखे रिश्ते...monalihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00644599427657644560noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-3389094070480790312012-09-13T09:50:45.258-07:002012-09-13T09:50:45.258-07:00Arse baad itti dilchaspi aayi kisi post me ke do b...Arse baad itti dilchaspi aayi kisi post me ke do baari padha. ek ek line me mehnat dikhti hai ya ho sakta hai ye apki swabhawik lekhan kala ho.Kaafi sateek panktiyaan jo aapke samne tasweer banati chali jaaye ghatnaao ki! atyant hi umda. बेईमान शायरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983189752575300196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-4016817851057667472012-07-18T20:46:44.747-07:002012-07-18T20:46:44.747-07:00aap bauhat accha likhti hain...impressive indeed :...aap bauhat accha likhti hain...impressive indeed :)Saumyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03922889885887781227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-13134497326108549122012-07-17T07:20:15.972-07:002012-07-17T07:20:15.972-07:00जुगनू सरीखे रिश्ते...
सुंदर लेखन पढ़ने में दिखने ...जुगनू सरीखे रिश्ते...<br /><br />सुंदर लेखन पढ़ने में दिखने लगते हैं चमकते हुऎ जुगनू ढेर सारे !सुशील कुमार जोशीhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09743123028689531714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-30816440642756860812012-07-16T02:33:29.892-07:002012-07-16T02:33:29.892-07:00aap jyada gahra likhne lagi shadi ke baad .bahut s...aap jyada gahra likhne lagi shadi ke baad .bahut sundarkanu.....https://www.blogger.com/profile/16556686104218337506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-11732160744857083932012-07-15T20:55:24.803-07:002012-07-15T20:55:24.803-07:00this is good.this is good.सुरेन्द्र "मुल्हिद"https://www.blogger.com/profile/00509168515861229579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-59139896863954548372012-07-15T12:06:01.637-07:002012-07-15T12:06:01.637-07:00wow..just amezing. like it very much.wow..just amezing. like it very much.pallavi trivedihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13303235514780334791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-3107820671907771642012-07-15T11:56:00.456-07:002012-07-15T11:56:00.456-07:00last ke kuch paragraphs to kisi fiction novel jais...last ke kuch paragraphs to kisi fiction novel jaisaa hai... very very very<br />very impressed....<br /><br />waqt nikaalna padega yahan aur padhne ke liyee... thank you..सागरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13742050198890044426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-92025331013426407752012-07-15T11:55:08.833-07:002012-07-15T11:55:08.833-07:00last ke kuch paragraphs to kisi fiction novel jais...last ke kuch paragraphs to kisi fiction novel jaisaa hai... very very very very impressed.... <br /><br />waqt nikaalna padega yahan aur padhne ke liyee... thank you...सागरhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13742050198890044426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-78118542479665914192012-07-15T11:26:08.617-07:002012-07-15T11:26:08.617-07:00bahut acha laga post padh ke ,kitne ache se likh d...bahut acha laga post padh ke ,kitne ache se likh deti ho jo kuch mahsoos karti ho....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-75406112425535268912012-07-15T01:33:00.054-07:002012-07-15T01:33:00.054-07:00मोनाली आप भावनाओं का ऐसा ताना बाना बुनती है कि पढक...मोनाली आप भावनाओं का ऐसा ताना बाना बुनती है कि पढकर ऐसा लगता है कि कहीं और पहुँच गए. भावनाओं का यह ज्वार भी बेहद उम्दा रहा.रचना दीक्षितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10298077073448653913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2760657341531578803.post-36628033464112217402012-07-14T23:22:44.573-07:002012-07-14T23:22:44.573-07:00मुझे ये लाइन बहुत पसंद आयी ...
"गलती तेरी है...मुझे ये लाइन बहुत पसंद आयी ...<br /><br />"गलती तेरी है... मेरे आते ही बता क्यूं नहीं दिया कि यहीं नाक के नीचे छिपा रखी है ये बत्तीस दांतों वाली perfect smile..."<br /><br />कोई ऐसे भी छुपाता है भला इस्माइल :)<br /><br />बाकी पोस्ट तो काफी गहरी है !!!देवांशु निगमhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16694228440801501650noreply@blogger.com